Post by Terd Ferguson on Jun 2, 2011 8:42:51 GMT -6
So last night was Dave and Bob's big open mic night at Hyenas Comedy club.
Overall I'd call it a big success. Bob's material was limited to "gravy boat" which lasted about as long as his standard sex acts, MAYBE reaching the 2 minute mark.
Dave did a full set with some very good bits.
Bob needs to work on his material but delivery was ok.
Dave needs to work on his punchlines...the stories were funny as hell but there has to be a definitive wrapping up (punchline, catch phrase, something) and find a transition to the next story.
Good stuff by both. I heard a rumor they are going to do this regularly on Wednesdays. Obviously I'm rarely in town on Wednesdays so I'll miss them. Hopefully they will get good enough to be asked to do a set or two sometime between Thursday night and Sunday night when I can go.
Overall I'd call it a big success. Bob's material was limited to "gravy boat" which lasted about as long as his standard sex acts, MAYBE reaching the 2 minute mark.
Dave did a full set with some very good bits.
Bob needs to work on his material but delivery was ok.
Dave needs to work on his punchlines...the stories were funny as hell but there has to be a definitive wrapping up (punchline, catch phrase, something) and find a transition to the next story.
Good stuff by both. I heard a rumor they are going to do this regularly on Wednesdays. Obviously I'm rarely in town on Wednesdays so I'll miss them. Hopefully they will get good enough to be asked to do a set or two sometime between Thursday night and Sunday night when I can go.
